Freak the Mighty: The last post Final Draft

In this novel Freak the Mighty the protagonist shows how the relation between family and friendship are important.

First, Max and Kevin met to sum become a best friend. Each of them need a friends cause they were a freak. Max is giant, stupid, orphan and he can be seen bad but have wide mind, However in contrast Kevin is dwarf, smart and lonely too. In this novel show, ‘Kevin didn’t told Max that he is going to die. That Kevin doesn’t want Max feel sorry or die with him.’ Therefore we can see the friendships between the.

Secondly, Max and his grandparents bond. He live with his grand parent Grim and Gram. His father killed his mother and he went to prison, thus he can called dwarf. While he bond with his grandparents, he learn such a bad things like his father. Therefore he become a kicker it can be seen that cause of his family. However after he met his new friend Kevin he can fixed. Thus it shows too the friendships and family are important.

Lastly Freak the Mighty. In this part it show friendships are important. After Freak and Max met, their life becomes more easier and a bit peaceful, because they got friend. They are Freak. They promise that they’ll be forever best friend.

The End of the Year...

I think this blog post can be last post. Today I'm going to write about my goal this year and next year.

 I got little many goals. My goals were meeting homework in deadline, being friendly to friends and teachers, listen carefully to teachers while having lesson and exercising. I have met some of my goals. Those are being friendly to friends and teacher, listen carefully to teacher while having lesson and exercising. I was being kind to friends and teachers. I tried hard. And while having lesson I really focus on what teachers saying. Exercising was the easiest goal that I have met. Except soccer I like all sports to play. The soccer is my worst sport, because if I miss the ball everyone blame me and I don't know how to play it well.

 For being friendly to friends and teachers, they helped me a lot to be friendly. Not just me they were very kind and care of me a lot, thus I can be more friendly with them. Listen carefully to teachers while having lesson, I think I didn't get anyone help. I successfully met that goal be myself. And lastly exercising. Of course PE teacher helped me but grade 7 friends were helped me more. They helped me to exercising, they care of me and playing together. But there is one goal I didn't meet. It was really hard. It's meeting homework in deadline. I think the reason that I can't meet this goal is because I was lazy. My lazy was stepped me from meeting this goal. I think I have to make a new goal for next year which is not being lazy.

 And now I'm going to write about my next year goals which is for school and my personal life. For my school goal is as well as I said in up there Not to being lazy, meeting homework in deadline, friendly to friends and teachers and last one is exercise to grow up. Those are my next year goal. I wish I will met all of them.

Now I will tell about me this year. As a student I learned about myself very lazy. I think not all but a little homework didn't met the deadline, and when I was at home I felt lazy to doing my homework. In a person I felt I have to grow up fitness. I felt they were very shortage. After run one lap in gym I felt very tired but I'm doing my best. So I learned I have to improve my fitness.

In this year I felt my English has been improved a lot. I felt that because before this year, I was hard to speaking in english and I didn't care about grammar that I use while writing or speaking. But after I join ESl and concentrate in English class, I learned that I have to use right grammar and vocabularies. And I have learned lots of new words like some new transition words. Thanks for reading my final post.

Final Task: Analysis!

 The topic that I chose is 'Golf.' My essential question is 'Who wear the green jackets and how can I improve my golf by learning about them?'. There are some reason that I chose this topic and essential question. The reason for topic, I chose the topic to Golf because I'm interested in the sport. To sum the reason for essential question is I want to know who wear the green jackets because it's hard to wear. It must win to wear green jacket. And I want to learn about them throughout this unit.


 Untill today I did 3 Bloom's Taxonomy. It's Knowledge, Comprehension and Application. In knowledge part I got three to do task they were 'List the people who have been in the Green Jacket, Describe some tips for playing golf (Put pics with this) and Describe which skills in golf you will try to focus on learning and explain why (as well as which ones you won’t and why not'. In this part I have to research hard. After Knowledge I start Comprehension. Also I got to do task. They were 'Predict what golf skills I will be able to learn and why?, Compare two golfer who wear green jacket about their time line while. and Describe what the basic tips  to play the golf.' In this part I also have to research and think my opinion. Lastly in application, I got big and hard to do task for it. They were ' A video explaining HOW to play golf and focusing on the skills that you learned (this video will INCLUDE shots of you practicing, but your entire video should not just be you practicing golf), as well as explaining that was difficult and easy for you when learning these skills and why. and A slide show to summarize what you want to teach people. This should include pictures of yourself performing the skills and written explanations.' I think this part was the hardest part in Bloom's Taxonomy. I have to play the golf. In this part I took a video and picture to finish.

Again my essential question is 'Who wears the freen jacket and how can I improve my golf by learning about them?'. Now I'm going to answers them. I can't tell everyone golfer who wear green jacket. I just know some. They are: Tiger Woods, Mike Weir, Phil Mickelson, Zach Johnson, Trevor Immelman, Angel Cebrera and Charl Schwartzel. To sum I can improve my golf skill by learning about them, who I know. I saw there movement and skills.

UOI Interview With Mrs. Raisdana

 Firstly, I'm going to tell the three questions that I chose for the interview with Mrs. Raisdana. The first question is "If you could choose your topic again, would you choose the same one, or a different one? Explain why." Second question is "If you could re-do any part of your project so far, what would you change and why?" and Last question is "What have to you learned about yourself as a learner, and about the WAY that you learn through this unit?". For the reason I choose these questions are; First question because I want to everyone that we have to choose the topic seriously that you can do really well. The reason for second question is I want one more chance to do for my mark. So I want tell everyone at once we have to do properly and well. Last question, because I want tell everyone to know how well I can focus if I know the way that I learn through this unit.

After I got the questions I'll prepare my answers step by step. Firstly after I chose the questions, I can find the meaning for that questions. Thou I can answer the questions well while practicing and interviewing. Secondly, I will answers the question in other document and practice for the question. After that I will edit more to sum memorize it until it can be seen that real. After step by step, I will predict how I think I will do when having a interview and the reason for that. First, before I have a interview I will check that uniform is in properly dressed or not than I will check again for the notes that I practice for the answers. The reason is I want to show the people I'm student who want to know the way I can study well, and not to make a mistake when giving my interview.

 My Interview

My reflection

I prepare a lot for my interview. I prepare for the answers. As last time I said I practice in front of my friends and family. They give me some comment that I have to fix, thus I changed some. And before having interview I cleaned my clothes and hair properly. During the interview I felt very nervous, I felt almost die, but I think I did quiet good. I felt very differently from other day. I don't know why but it was really scary and nervous. I have done some differently then usual interview. I didn't chang the clothes. I think I have changed clothes when I have other interview, but in this time I didn't because I want to tell people I'm one of student who have this expriment. Thank You!!!

Level 3: Application

 My to do tasks. First one was making video explaining how to play golf and focusing on the skills that I learned (this video will include shots of my practicing,) well as explaining that was difficult or easy for my when learning these skills and why. And second one was making slide show to summarize what I want to teach people. This should include pictures of myself performing the skills and written explanation.

The Movie That I Practicing

The Slide Show




 My to do tasks were easy but a bit hard. All of them have to take a picture and video, but they were easy. I took a picture of myself and make slide show about summarizing what am I going to teach and learn. And for video things are for showing how could I focusing on playing golf and skills. One was succesfuly finished but the other one was I tried but it was faild. I think it's very hard to make it.

The Next Level: Comprehension

Compare two golfers who wear green jacket about their best skills.

I will compare Tiger Woods and Nick Faldo’s experience. First, Nick Faldo won 6 times. He won 3 times from Masters Tournament, other 3 times are from The Open Championship. But Tiger Woods won 14 times in compotation. He won 4 times from Masters Tournament, 3 times from U.S Open, other 3 times from The Open Championship and lastly 4 times are from PGA Championship.

Before they were being a golfer they join some tour. Nick joined PGA Tour, European Tour and Champions Tour. And Tiger joined PGA Tour, European Tour, Japan Golf Tour, Asian Tour, and PGA Tour of Australasia. Nick won 9 times in PGA Tour, 30 times in European Tour and 7 times in other tours. But Tiger won 71 times in PGA Tour, 38 times in European Tour, 2 times in Japan Golf Tour, 1 time in Asian Tour, 1 time in PGA Tour of Australasia and 15 times in other tour. I think still Tiger Woods is better then Nick Faldo.

Predict what golf skills I will be able to learn and why?

I think I will be able to learn about backspin and driving, because I haven’t learned it. Backspin is look for me like cool, so I would like to learn about it. And Driving is most important thing to golf player, because it help making my mind happy and good for play next turn.

Describe what the basic tips to play the golf.

 

Golf Swing Tip #1: The Grip

The grip is the foundation of your golf swing and developing the right grip is critical to your success in hitting the ball farther and straighter. There are many different grips out there that you can use. Here are few common grip types:

- The Interlocking Grip – With this grip the index finger of the left hand and the little finger of the right hand combine and interlock. Those that have thick hands, or shorter hands commonly use it. This grip is usually the best option for most people and will allow you to create proper leverage for maximum power.

- The Overlapping Grip – This grip involves having the little finger of the right hand sit on top of the index finger of the left hand. Most male golfers use this grip because it does require strong wrists and forearms.

- The Baseball Grip – With this grip the index finger of the left hand and the little finger of the right hand do not overlap but do make contact with each other. This is usually the default grip for most beginners or golfers with weaker arm and wrist strength. You probably do not want to keep using this grip as the interlocking or overlapping will work better in most cases.

Golf Swing Tip #2: The Stance

The ideal stance is to have your weight equally balanced. It is important to stay relaxed over the golf ball as any tension will affect the quality of your golf swing so make sure to follow this important golf tip. You want to bend at the hips when addressing the golf balls and have a slight flex in the knees also. In addition keeping the spine erect and not rounded is important.

Let your arms hang naturally once you bend your hips, avoid extending your arms straight as there should be an angle between the arms and the shaft.

Golf Swing Tip #3: The Backswing

Keep the left arm straight (right handed players) during the backswing and go back as far as you can. Your tempo is dictated really by your personality, some people are naturally slow movers so will have a slower tempo while others tend to move faster so do what is most comfortable for you.

Golf Swing Tip #4: The Downswing

One of the key elements in the downswing is to keep your head in the same position. Begin your downswing with the hips and keep your head behind the ball until your follow through. Do not use your right hand to try to generate more power. The power in your golf swing will come from the leverage in the angle between the club and your wrists. Try to hold the angle between the clubs and the wrists as much as possible in order to generate maximum power.

Do not rush the downswing as this will usually result in poor shots and inconsistency. You want to have a gradually increasing speed on the downswing and make sure that you have good balance and swing well within yourself. Do not try to muscle the club or swing hard, just make a smooth and controlled movement and you will find that this will help you to hit the ball solidly on a regular basis.

Golf Swing Tip #5: The Follow Through

After impact you want the club to fully release while keeping your head behind the ball. Your head should naturally come up with your right shoulder, so your chin should be over your right shoulder and your head facing the target to complete the follow through.

Remember to have some patience when learning the golf swing, go to the range and practice your swing without hitting any golf balls to start and then as you feel more comfortable with your swing you can start hitting a few balls.

Use these golf swing tips to practice your swing on the range for a few days, maybe even a couple of weeks until you are comfortable before you go out to the golf course. Remember to relax and focus on your targets when you are on the course and try to avoid thinking about swing mechanics on the golf course, rather focus on trusting and believing in your game.

What happen after the story?

I think Kevin will heard about why his father went to jail from his father. He heard that his father killed someone because he was angry, the name of person is Max's father. Max was also heard about that, Kevin saw Max and Max ran away with crying.

Why freak told max about human robot?

Freak told Max about human robot, because he doesn't have legs so he want get human robot to have his legs and be seems to be a normal person.

Unit of Inquiry, Week 1: Knowledge

While I'm doing this topic, I think I did well and it wasn't that hard for me to do this task. I think that next week task will be harder that now so I will try more better. And I'll try finish on time and focus on it. My topic is about golf. My essential questions are'Who wear the green jacket and how can I improve by learning them.'

The part of knowledge, this week:

Gofler
List the people who have been wear in the Green Jacket
Describe some tips for playing golf (Put pics with this)
Describe which skills in golf you will try to focus on learning and explain why?

Kyoung Jun
Topic: Golf
Essential questions: Who wear the green jacket and how can I improve by learning them.
AOI: Health and Social Education

The list of the people who have been wear the green jacket. (2010~1990)

2011	Charl Schwartzel
2010	Phil Mickelson
2009	Angel Cabrera
2008	Trevor Immelman
2007	Zach Johnson
2006	Phil Mickelson
2005	Tiger Woods
2004	Phil Mickelson
2003	Mike Weir
2002	Tiger Woods
2001	Tiger Woods
2000	Vijay Singh
1999	Jose Maria Olazabal
1998	Mark O'Meara
1997	Tiger Woods
1996	Nick Faldo
1995	Ben Crenshaw
1994	Jose Maria Olazabal
1993	Bernhard Langer
1992	Fred Couples
1991	Ian Woosnam
1990	Nick Faldo

Tips of golf

Golf Swing Tip #1: The Grip
The grip is the foundation of your golf swing and developing the right grip is critical to your success in hitting the ball farther and straighter. There are many different grips out there that you can use. Here are few common grip types:

- The Interlocking Grip – With this grip the index finger of the left hand and the little finger of the right hand combine and interlock. Those that have thick hands, or shorter hands commonly use it. This grip is usually the best option for most people and will allow you to create proper leverage for maximum power.

- The Overlapping Grip – This grip involves having the little finger of the right hand sit on top of the index finger of the left hand. Most male golfers use this grip because it does require strong wrists and forearms.

- The Baseball Grip – With this grip the index finger of the left hand and the little finger of the right hand do not overlap but do make contact with each other. This is usually the default grip for most beginners or golfers with weaker arm and wrist strength. You probably do not want to keep using this grip as the interlocking or overlapping will work better in most cases.

 
Golf Swing Tip #2: The Stance
The ideal stance is to have your weight equally balanced. It is important to stay relaxed over the golf ball as any tension will affect the quality of your golf swing so make sure to follow this important golf tip. You want to bend at the hips when addressing the golf balls and have a slight flex in the knees also. In addition keeping the spine erect and not rounded is important.
Let your arms hang naturally once you bend your hips, avoid extending your arms straight as there should be an angle between the arms and the shaft.

Golf Swing Tip #3: The Backswing
Keep the left arm straight (right handed players) during the backswing and go back as far as you can. Your tempo is dictated really by your personality, some people are naturally slow movers so will have a slower tempo while others tend to move faster so do what is most comfortable for you.

Golf Swing Tip #4: The Downswing
One of the key elements in the downswing is to keep your head in the same position. Begin your downswing with the hips and keep your head behind the ball until your follow through. Do not use your right hand to try to generate more power. The power in your golf swing will come from the leverage in the angle between the club and your wrists. Try to hold the angle between the clubs and the wrists as much as possible in order to generate maximum power.
Do not rush the downswing as this will usually result in poor shots and inconsistency. You want to have a gradually increasing speed on the downswing and make sure that you have good balance and swing well within yourself. Do not try to muscle the club or swing hard, just make a smooth and controlled movement and you will find that this will help you to hit the ball solidly on a regular basis.

Golf Swing Tip #5: The Follow Through
After impact you want the club to fully release while keeping your head behind the ball. Your head should naturally come up with your right shoulder, so your chin should be over your right shoulder and your head facing the target to complete the follow through.
Remember to have some patience when learning the golf swing, go to the range and practice your swing without hitting any golf balls to start and then as you feel more comfortable with your swing you can start hitting a few balls.
Use these golf swing tips to practice your swing on the range for a few days, maybe even a couple of weeks until you are comfortable before you go out to the golf course. Remember to relax and focus on your targets when you are on the course and try to avoid thinking about swing mechanics on the golf course, rather focus on trusting and believing in your game.

Describe which skills in golf you will try to focus on learning and explain why?

I want really learn about Back Spin. It’s cool and this skill is making the ball to spin back. Because of this skill, Tiger Woods can be a popular. And I want learn more about Driving Shoot. Because I heard first driving shoot is good, other shoots will be good too. So I would learn more about driving shoot. But I won't learn about Irons shoot. Because I think I'm already good at playing with them.

Driving Shoot

Irons Shoot

Welcome to My Unit Of Inquiry!

During this Unit Of Inquiry, my topic is about golf. My essential question is "Who wear the green jacket and How can I improve by learning about them?" I choose this essential question, because I really want to know more about golf and improve my golf skill. The Area Of Interaction that this topic meets is 'Health & Social Education'. Because it is match with social education, it help to improve and knowledge.

I am an Visual learner(Visual Learner is which people learn with watching skill), so I will learn with researching and read to improve my golf knowledge. The activities that I will learn about this are:record the video that I'm improving golf.To start the knowledge part about this project. I will make a list of person who wear the green jacket and describe what happened after learning about them. I can learn and more be knowledgeable about golf.

My Daily Schedule, One Week

Monday-Thursday

6:00 am - 6:30 am wake up, get dressed, eat breakfast.

6:30 am - 7:00 am on the way school.

7:00 am - 3:00 pm school.

3:00 pm - 4:00 pm Leave and Arrive school.

4:00 pm - 5:00 pm Have English Lesson

5:00 pm - 7:00 pm eat dinner

7:00 pm - 8:00 pm Mandarine Lesson.

8:00 pm - 9:00 pm Free time

9:00 pm - 12:00 pm Wash and chat with play laptop

12:00 am Go to bed.

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Tuseday-Friday

6:00 am - 6:30 am wake up, get dressed

6:30 am - 7:00 am Leave home and arrive school.

7:00 am - 3:00 pm school.

3:00 pm - 4:00 pm went home.

4:00 pm - 6:00 pm play laptop and watch TV.

6:00 pm - 6:45 pm Math Lesson

6:45 pm - 7:45 pm eat dinner.

7:45 pm - 9:00 pm Start homework and have a shower.

9:00 pm - 11:00 pm Finish homework and chat with friends and play laptop

1:00 am go to bed.

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Wednesday

6:00 am - 6:30 am wake up, get dressed

6:30 am - 7:00 am Leave home and arrive school.

7:00 am - 3:00 pm school.

3:00 pm - 4:00 pm went home.

4:00 pm - 4:50 pm play laptop and watch TV.

4:50 pm - 6:00 pm English Lesson

6:00 pm - 6:55 pm eat dinner.

6:55 pm - 7:00 pm Korean Lesson

9:00 pm - 11:00 pm  Have a shower and Start homework

11:00 - 12:50 am Finished and play latop or watch TV then go to bed.

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Saturday

8:00 am - 8:30 am wake up and eat breakfast.

8:30 am - 8:40 am Prepare to go out

8:40 am - 10:00 am Finish shopping and get my parent's retaurant

10:00 am - 10:30 am Watch Tv or play with my laptop

10:30 am - 11:00 am Do home work

11:00 am - 2:00 pm Play laptop

2:00 pm - 3:00 pm Have Lunch

3:00 pm - 4:00 pm Watch TV

4:00 pm - 5:00 pm Read books

5:00 pm - 5:30 pm  Leave and get home

5:30 pm - 6:00 pm Watch Tv

6:00 pm - 7:00 pm Have dinner

10:00 pm - 11:30 pm Wash and play or chatting

11:30 pm Go to bed

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Sunday

8:00 am - 8:30 am wake up and eat breakfast.

8:30 am - 8:40 am Prepare to go church

8:40 am - 10:00 am Church

10:00 am - 10:30 am get home

10:30 am - 11:00 am Watch TV

11:00 am - 2:00 pm Do homework

2:00 pm - 3:00 pm Have Lunch

3:00 pm - 4:00 pm Watch TV

4:00 pm - 6:00 pm Study

6:00 pm - 7:00 pm Play laptop

7:00 pm - 8:00 pm Have dinner

9:00 pm - 11:00 pm Wash and chat with  play laptop

12:00 pm Go to Bed

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1. I think i get lots of free time  Saturday, and Sunday, because tI can go to bed at any time and I don't have any lessons

How will this information affect the topic that I choose?

2. I can't understand the question.

3. I think it won't be difficult but sometimes it will be because I don't know what will happen. My time schedules are always change. I don't when I'll study, play or etc. My mind is very unpredicatable.

Parts Of Speech Final Assessment!

Noun:

This is the project we did in google Doc slide show. It is not just mine, it's our ESL classmates. So this is the slide shows is about telling there are lots kind of noun. Every one did each 3 things that mrs. Raisdana gave us. First, I go to flickr.com and go to 'Advanced Research' and go down find a box after 'Creative Comment'. Checked that box and find image. Click and check down. If it said 'Some Rights Are Protected' you click 'Action' up image and Click 'Show all sizes'. Click Medium size and downloaded. And post in the slide show. And I must put 'image by' and linked. I get the URL from where I get. Write about what kinds of noun at least 2.

This is the video about I learned.

Verb:

Part 1: Present Tense: What I Do Everyday

Part 2: Past Tense: What I Did Last Sunday

Adjective:

Adverb:

I did a lot of work for this movie. I make a movie and record with my partner. While we are recording we had some mistake, so we have to make movie from begin. I have learned a lot of thing about adverbs while making this movie. The adverbs mean, the word describe the word verb, adjective, and the another verb. While I making this movie, it helped me to learn lots of things about adverbs. It makes me to find more detail about what is adverbs and what are the examples of adverbs. So I know almost perfect about adverb. I enjoyed this project. Because it was fun to making movie and recording, but I was disappointing about recording, because the turn going out so fast so  I have to speak fast but it was hard. I think I shared the work and responsibility well. Because we had finish our work as fast we can. The script was also finish well and fast. And I think I was good partner. We helped each other and I have done my work properly.

Final Project- What I've Learned About Grammar

 

Here is my original writing piece:

Here is my edited writing sample:

Here is my iMovie explaining my editing process:

Thinking about Communities and Freaks

In 4th term we had spent time to learning about what is communities and we are going to learn about them through Freaks the Mighty book. Before we read this book, Mr. Jabiz asked us what is community and freaks means. Community is a group of people with the same opinion, goals, and etc. Freaks is kind of people that look strange, and unusual/abnormal. If I have to choose, I'll choose Community. Because I don't want to be alone, I like to talk a lot with friends. 

Adverb Movie Project

 I did a lot of work for this movie. I make a movie and record with my partner. While we are recording we had some mistake, so we have to make movie from begin. I have learned a lot of thing about adverbs while making this movie. The adverbs mean, the word describe the word verb, adjective, and the another verb. While I making this movie, it helped me to learn lots of things about adverbs. It makes me to find more detail about what is adverbs and what are the examples of adverbs. So I know almost perfect about adverb. I enjoyed this project. Because it was fun to making movie and recording, but I was disappointing about recording, because the turn going out so fast so  I have to speak fast but it was hard. I think I shared the work and responsibility well. Because we had finish our work as fast we can. The script was also finish well and fast. And I think I was good partner. We helped each other and I have done my work properly.

Teaching About Sentences!

Enjoy my comic and try understand about Setnece structure!!

I made this comic with my new partener Jae Min. Jae min makes comic in Toondoo and I made a script about it. We were talking about sentence structure.
First, we write a script.Then we went to Toodoo and sign up to make comic. We chose Back ground and charactors. After we chose we used bubble speech explain about sentence structure. Lastly, we put in blogspost. And now I'm writing reflection about this. Thank you!!

What I learned today

 Today in ESL class, I learned about compound sentences, complex sentences and run-on sentences.

What are compound sentences? The compound sentences are two complete and simple sentences in one sentences. Example of compund sentence is 'I am teacher, but you are student.' there are two sentences but it is one sentences because it has only one period. 

 Complex sentences are the sentences have independents clause and dependents clause joined together. Independents clause it the sentence by it self and dependents clause is cannot be by it self. 'When I was young, I like to go airport.' In this sentence 'When I wa young' is dependents clause and 'I like to go airport' is independents clause.

 Lastly I learned what is run-on sentences are the setence is two or more sentences written as one sentence incorrectly. They go past the point where they should stop and are often too long. We can fix those thing with separate with periods, or join them together with a 'comma' and 'and, or, but or another connecting word, if it makes sense. The example are first run-on sentence is 'People love peace they hate war'. In this sentence, we can put connecting word. So I put 'comma' and 'but' between peace and love. So It will be 'People love peace, but they hate war'. This is all I learned today in ESL class. Thank you!!

Growing Poem

First time when I started write poem, I hate to write a poem. Because I thought it was hard to make it, but when I made first poem it was easy. So I wrote lots of poem then my friends, and getting love the poem. But when Mr. Jabiz told us to make the book, I felt very bad. It was disgusting. But I know I have to do, so I started to make it. I thought making book is hard but when I finish it I was proud of it. So I but my book in my blog. \

Take a  look my first book.

My first poem

What I Learned Today

Today in ESL class, I learned about how to make the sentence with complete sentence.
There are three things that every complete sentence must have/do. First thing is subject. The subject is that the who or what the sentence is about. 'I met him.' in this sentence I is subject. Second thing is Predicate. The predicate is the word telling what the subject does, has, is or is like. 'I play games.' In this sentence PLAY GAMES are predicate. The last thing is COMPLETE thought. This is the importent one.

And I leraned about fragment too. The fragment is a sentence DOESN'T HAVE subject, predicate or tell a complete thought. The example of a sentence fragment are first,'Watching TV' second is 'I Basketball' third is 'I hit'. The first sentence is fragment because it missed subject. Second sentence missed predicate and last sentence missed complete thought.

A Day In My Life

Part 1: Present Tense: What I Do Everyday

Part 2: Past Tense: What I Did Last Sunday

What Are Adjectives?

 

 

My best three poems

I read The Red WheelBarrow and wrote the poem which are under this sentence. T

he Red Wheel Barrow poem is wrote by William Carlos Williams

 image by Daveybot

 

So much depends upon

The quiet fire

Making dreams burn

But making people warm

So much depends upon
The violent water
Making giant tsunamis
Creating a gloomy mood.





image by astanhope

So much depends upon

The soft music

Making me relaxed

Moving me to sing

 image by Ferrari + caballos + fuerza = cerebro Humano

Blue Car and Shinning Star Poems

Blue Car Poem and Shinning Star Poem
This is the poem from Love That Dog. First I put the beats and recorded, I tried fix something and make the beats and my voice same beat. After I finish I checked from Mr. Zabbis and sign up to soundcloud and upload my podcast and upload in blog. It's almost same Shinning Star poem. I just make it first put beat and recorded and fix and checked and upload in blog. I put those poem in same podcast so shinning star poem will start after bluecar poem.


Shinning Star and Blue Car Poems by juncho1017

Parts Of Speech Final Assesment!

Noun:

This is the project we did in google Doc slide show. It is not just mine, it's our ESL classmates. So this is the slide shows is about telling there are lots kind of noun. Every one did each 3 things that mrs. Raisdana gave us. First, I go to flickr.com and go to 'Advanced Research' and go down find a box after 'Creative Comment'. Checked that box and find image. Click and check down. If it said 'Some Rights Are Protected' you click 'Action' up image and Click 'Show all sizes'. Click Medium size and downloaded. And post in the slide show. And I must put 'image by' and linked. I get the URL from where I get. Write about what kinds of noun at least 2.

This is the video about I learned.

Verb:

Part 1: Present Tense: What I Do Everyday

Part 2: Past Tense: What I Did Last Sunday

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I did a lot of work for this movie. I make a movie and record with my partner. While we are recording we had some mistake, so we have to make movie from begin. I have learned a lot of thing about adverbs while making this movie. The adverbs mean, the word describe the word verb, adjective, and the another verb. While I making this movie, it helped me to learn lots of things about adverbs. It makes me to find more detail about what is adverbs and what are the examples of adverbs. So I know almost perfect about adverb. I enjoyed this project. Because it was fun to making movie and recording, but I was disappointing about recording, because the turn going out so fast so  I have to speak fast but it was hard. I think I shared the work and responsibility well. Because we had finish our work as fast we can. The script was also finish well and fast. And I think I was good partner. We helped each other and I have done my work properly.

Poetry

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We are starting to study poetry in my English class and I think every ones know about poetry but I just know just little. I have written poetry when I was in korean school(JIKS).  I think I will get fun of it, because I can learn more English and know what is deffirence with they and English Poetry. korean Peotry. I think I like the photographs, because I saw the flowers and bee with big size. I saw it very impressively. I understood lots of saying that Mr. Raisdana said about the walls. If the person make a wall that person can loss their own courge and bravery. So try not to laugh when freinds says wrong or stupid.

I don't know any more about this poetry. But I think I'm nearly interested in this unit.

My Holiday

MY HOLIDAY

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In my holiday, I went to the Anyer beach with my friends family. Not all, just mom and children. I must rode the car to go there for near 2 hours. I rode car with my brother, cousin, Jae Min and Eun Ju. When we arrived at hotel, we met our mom and looking for the room. We got the large room. I think it was very expensive. After we go to the hotel room, we looking around the room. There was 2 wide room. Jae Min and I opened the laptop and listened to music and played video games in the wide room.

I think 30minutes later. Another friend Jin Woo came to our room with his sister and his mom. They just arrived. After we met him we change the clothes to swimming suit, because we were going to beach. The beach was very near with our hotel room.

When we arrive at beach, we lend the mini surf board and we went to the waves. 1hour later we rode Banana boat. I feel almost dead. The throw us to the big waves. Second time it was very tired to go out to beach, because there was very big waves. The boat also almost sank. I felt very tiered. After we played at the beach we go to swimming pool and played again. When the sky was being dark we went back to our hotel room and had a shower. At dinner time, we had BBQ party. We ate some pork, ham and fry some garlic and kimchi. It was very delicious. It was the third best holiday in my life.