My best three poems

I read The Red WheelBarrow and wrote the poem which are under this sentence. T

he Red Wheel Barrow poem is wrote by William Carlos Williams

 image by Daveybot

 

So much depends upon

The quiet fire

Making dreams burn

But making people warm

So much depends upon
The violent water
Making giant tsunamis
Creating a gloomy mood.





image by astanhope

So much depends upon

The soft music

Making me relaxed

Moving me to sing

 image by Ferrari + caballos + fuerza = cerebro Humano

Blue Car and Shinning Star Poems

Blue Car Poem and Shinning Star Poem
This is the poem from Love That Dog. First I put the beats and recorded, I tried fix something and make the beats and my voice same beat. After I finish I checked from Mr. Zabbis and sign up to soundcloud and upload my podcast and upload in blog. It's almost same Shinning Star poem. I just make it first put beat and recorded and fix and checked and upload in blog. I put those poem in same podcast so shinning star poem will start after bluecar poem.


Shinning Star and Blue Car Poems by juncho1017

Parts Of Speech Final Assesment!

Noun:

This is the project we did in google Doc slide show. It is not just mine, it's our ESL classmates. So this is the slide shows is about telling there are lots kind of noun. Every one did each 3 things that mrs. Raisdana gave us. First, I go to flickr.com and go to 'Advanced Research' and go down find a box after 'Creative Comment'. Checked that box and find image. Click and check down. If it said 'Some Rights Are Protected' you click 'Action' up image and Click 'Show all sizes'. Click Medium size and downloaded. And post in the slide show. And I must put 'image by' and linked. I get the URL from where I get. Write about what kinds of noun at least 2.

This is the video about I learned.

Verb:

Part 1: Present Tense: What I Do Everyday

Part 2: Past Tense: What I Did Last Sunday

Adjective:

 

Adverb:

I did a lot of work for this movie. I make a movie and record with my partner. While we are recording we had some mistake, so we have to make movie from begin. I have learned a lot of thing about adverbs while making this movie. The adverbs mean, the word describe the word verb, adjective, and the another verb. While I making this movie, it helped me to learn lots of things about adverbs. It makes me to find more detail about what is adverbs and what are the examples of adverbs. So I know almost perfect about adverb. I enjoyed this project. Because it was fun to making movie and recording, but I was disappointing about recording, because the turn going out so fast so  I have to speak fast but it was hard. I think I shared the work and responsibility well. Because we had finish our work as fast we can. The script was also finish well and fast. And I think I was good partner. We helped each other and I have done my work properly.

Poetry

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We are starting to study poetry in my English class and I think every ones know about poetry but I just know just little. I have written poetry when I was in korean school(JIKS).  I think I will get fun of it, because I can learn more English and know what is deffirence with they and English Poetry. korean Peotry. I think I like the photographs, because I saw the flowers and bee with big size. I saw it very impressively. I understood lots of saying that Mr. Raisdana said about the walls. If the person make a wall that person can loss their own courge and bravery. So try not to laugh when freinds says wrong or stupid.

I don't know any more about this poetry. But I think I'm nearly interested in this unit.

My Holiday

MY HOLIDAY

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In my holiday, I went to the Anyer beach with my friends family. Not all, just mom and children. I must rode the car to go there for near 2 hours. I rode car with my brother, cousin, Jae Min and Eun Ju. When we arrived at hotel, we met our mom and looking for the room. We got the large room. I think it was very expensive. After we go to the hotel room, we looking around the room. There was 2 wide room. Jae Min and I opened the laptop and listened to music and played video games in the wide room.

I think 30minutes later. Another friend Jin Woo came to our room with his sister and his mom. They just arrived. After we met him we change the clothes to swimming suit, because we were going to beach. The beach was very near with our hotel room.

When we arrive at beach, we lend the mini surf board and we went to the waves. 1hour later we rode Banana boat. I feel almost dead. The throw us to the big waves. Second time it was very tired to go out to beach, because there was very big waves. The boat also almost sank. I felt very tiered. After we played at the beach we go to swimming pool and played again. When the sky was being dark we went back to our hotel room and had a shower. At dinner time, we had BBQ party. We ate some pork, ham and fry some garlic and kimchi. It was very delicious. It was the third best holiday in my life.

The advertisment of Iphone 4

The Iphone made in apple this is the new version of Iphone. I called Iphone 4. This design is made by Stven Job. I choose this video for several reason. First, I choose this because I want that Iphone 4. Second, I want recommendation to people because the design is good and we can use lots of application . Lastly, I want tell people that how iphone 4 face call works, if you try it will be fun and feel really good.

Welcome to Grammar! Writing Sample...

Caring

I like to helping or joining for helping group. When I was previous school I used to be a leader of helping group. My group did feeding animals in school's zoo, picking up the trash in the school road, giving water to flower, etc. So I think I'm Caring person. We tried to go to poor village in Indonesia, but we don't have money to help them and either car.


But, I made the situation better, actually not just me school. Like three weeks a day, there were helping day. Every student grab tongs and buckets and grab trashes in the road. So it was more better than past. Less trashes on the road, less insects, etc. I think not just me every one in my previous school students are caring.