The advertisment of Iphone 4

The Iphone made in apple this is the new version of Iphone. I called Iphone 4. This design is made by Stven Job. I choose this video for several reason. First, I choose this because I want that Iphone 4. Second, I want recommendation to people because the design is good and we can use lots of application . Lastly, I want tell people that how iphone 4 face call works, if you try it will be fun and feel really good.

Welcome to Grammar! Writing Sample...

Caring

I like to helping or joining for helping group. When I was previous school I used to be a leader of helping group. My group did feeding animals in school's zoo, picking up the trash in the school road, giving water to flower, etc. So I think I'm Caring person. We tried to go to poor village in Indonesia, but we don't have money to help them and either car.


But, I made the situation better, actually not just me school. Like three weeks a day, there were helping day. Every student grab tongs and buckets and grab trashes in the road. So it was more better than past. Less trashes on the road, less insects, etc. I think not just me every one in my previous school students are caring.

ESL 7- Unit 1 Reflection- Storytelling

 My Reflection about story telling.

Reading and telling and telling a story is differences. Those things are different because Reading is just use one voice and reading, but Telling is acting and use lot's voice. My difficult part was recoding in garage band while  I recoding I feel very strange and shy, so it was difficult part for me. The part of easy for me was making I movie, because if I finish record I just shared and waiting and Screen shot etc. It was very simple for me. I learned the most important things to remember when telling a story, it is using many tones, loving my story and using body language(Acting).  

I think my project is successful because I use my other tons, use body language and I loved my story. I feel it is enough good for me, because it's my first project ever I made. And I use lots time to make this podcast, while I doing there was something problem with my laptop. Lastly I think it is reflects. 

I think I understand the differences between reading a story and telling a story, because I feel that when I reading books I heard just reading. No other voice tons, no acting. But this time I have good experience. I've tried telling a story. So I learn how to use my other voice tones, how to acting when reading a story and how to loved my story. I enjoyed making story and editing image in Storybird, because I like to making a story with images. But, I didn't enjoy in editing adjective and Boy Over Board's 7 word, because I know I need to improve my English but it was one of hard part in this project. 

        Form IB profile, I think I learned Thinker, Knowledgeable and Risk taker. Because in Thinker, I did think about making story and editing words in my story. In Knowledgeable, I did search image more Knowledgeable. Lastly in Risk taker I learned that I don't need to shy about telling a story.

My video about my another two answer:

First Question: What are the difference between Reading a story and Telling a story?

  

Second Question: How well do you think you tell your story in your podcast to answer your question?

ESl 7 Unit 1 Final Project

Here is the Storybird that I created. It is called Catch that Stupid Mouse and it is about How did mouse get cheese:

http://storybird.com/books/catch-that-stupid-mouse-its-happened-in-large-new/?token=3xprdg

 Here is the story that I  wrote from this story bird:

Catch that stupid Mouse!!!!

One large new house that smell paint there was a huge mouse. That the huge house owner is one grandpa's house.  "Hi I'm Hamstermous." He was hungry "I want some cheese to eat!!" so he went to the large kitchen to get giant cheese to eat. He feels great when he found the large cheese, "Yaho~~~~finally i got it!!" he heard food steps, "What is that?? A~~~catch that stupid mouse!!!" grandpa shouted he was so angry, when he heard mouse voice. He smells mouse’s stinky body. He is avoid mice, cause it can make the house dirty, "Servant!!" he called his tired servant. His servant was chewing some delicious donuts and taking a great break. But if his owner called he must go there, he feels very sad, "I want more delicious donuts and break!!" he goes there with his tiny tears. "Please don't call me if I got my sweet break...." the owner, that ugly grandpa command him to catch the mouse. He chased that mouse and said, "Hey mouse, Stop there, I want take a break!!! Pleases." That mouse run and run and he hide like a small carrot. "PPhew~~ It will be saved,” he said with strain voice. When he hide like carrot he heard dangerous food steps. Then pinky dog found out, "A ha... I found you." "A~~~~~" then mouse ran away from him. He was tired and lazy, so he called his another servant too. They called 'Super Mouse'. The mouse hide under the pretty plant inside of large vase so he smells mud and plants. Again mouse also feel tired and strain. "Now, he can't find me!!" he said. He heard someones tread. "A,ha~~you were here!!!" it was super mice, they found him. "Hey block that wide way!!" but the timing was so not good. They also missed; they argued they were very angry, "A! Because of you we missed! Let's call Mr. Powerful cat!!" said super mice. They smell stinky sweat in their suit. When they were talking, that cute Hamstermouse hide in christmas tree. He feels anxious "I wish they won't find me!!" he wished. When that Mr. Powerful cat finding him, something tackle Hamstermouse fell down. "A~~~~" he screamed. Like a baby. So that Mr. Powerful cat heard Christmas tree’s decorations clanking and ran to beautiful Christmas tree, but it has already gone. "Wow!!!A~~ I missed. If I find him, I will eat that ugly mouse!!" he wasn’t glad. He dazzled and made sure. Hamstarmouse got some cold ices and hide inside those ices he feels very cold. But Mr. super cat found easily. Because he can see his blankly eyes. The ice was wreck with breaking sound. And he ran away. "Where should I hide??" he said. "Hey stop there. Please!!!!" Mr. supercat shouted with a tired voice and asked, "I'm so tired... I can't catch that super fast mouse, I suppose to go home now and take a break," he was annoyance, mouse heard breathing sound and he also take a relax. The cat complained then gone. Finally that mouse came out from cheese from large cheese then went to his fantastic mouse hall after he heard super cat’s complaining voice. He was very delighted. "PPhew~~his gone!! Horey!" he shouted. From now he feels happy, delight, and glad. "A~~ Finally I can eat this piece of big cheese, it was too tired to get this big cheese," He said when he eat lovely cheese. But he still heard grandpa’s angry voice and smells his pooh.

Here is a video of me reading my story:

Here is my podcast :I am telling my story:

Story Reflection

 

My story board image

This unit I use a lots of things.

I used lot of tools. I use story board, Google doc, blog, dictionary of thesaurus and word. first, used story board for later to telling story, second I used Google doc for sharing ideas or tell teacher what did I done and title with my story. third I used dictionary of thesaurus and word for finding smiler words, lastly I used word document for copy/ paste the screen shot story image and stories.

I also used lots of sites. I used Story Bird, Gmail, Flickr, Blogger and Youtube. First I used Story bird to make my story. Second I used Gmail for sharing Ideas with Gmail Google Doc. Third I used Flickr for finding my favorite movie's picture. Forth I used blogger to make my blog to put about my self and this reflection and also saw example things from teacher. Last I used Youtube for watching video about how to story telling.


And last I used and learned lots of skills. I use and learned editing adjectives and some word from boy over board, and copy/paste skill, screen shot skills and posting skill. First I used editing adjectives and some word from boy over board for my stories be more better, Second I used copy/paste for move my story to word document and Google Doc. Third I use screen shot skills for screen shot my story images to word document. Last I used posting skill to post my word to my blog.

I used all of these thing to make my perfect story board and preparing story telling.

Welcome To My Blog

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My name is Cho and I am a student at Sinarmas World Academy. I like to listening music and watching movies. I usually listen Korean songs, and My favorite movie is Avatar. My favorite sport is Golf. I started golf for almost 1year. When I'm in home, I usually doing my homework and go to academic. Not just those things, of course I watch T.V, playing computer, chatting or sleeping etc. I used to swimming with some friends but not now. Now I hate swimming. That's all. Thank you!